I did this story on how a boy finds ghosts in his backyard, or were those fake. This was the night of halloween after all the trick or treating. It was funny and scary at the same time. I didn't do a lot of show not tell, which I really regret doing, but it still made sense. I think Ryan edited it and thought it was great. I had the idea of making this story a ghost story because I thought it would be a scary fun story which mabey won't be scary to some people, but I liked it, and I hope you do too.